“It
might be the last game of the season. Make sure to cheer loud and be prepared
to lose your voice. Ready? Okay, let’s do this.”
“R-O-W-D-I-E that’s the way we spell
rowdy, rowdy. Let’s get rowdy! Woo!”
Toe-touches, big bows, intense games,
long nights, and McDonalds. This is what cheerleading is made of.

This was my first year being a cheerleader
and I have learned so much! There is a lot more to cheerleading than meets the eye.
It takes dedication, a positive attitude, and a lot of flexibility. Because of
this sport, I have met six amazing girls. These are the other Beulah High
School Cheerleaders, but I call them my best friends. We can trust one another
and always have each other’s back. That’s the unique thing about cheering,
unlike any other team where there is about 30 students stepping on each other
to become a starter, our squad can only have a maximum of eight girls. No one
thinks they are better than someone else. We support each other, because we
understand each other.
The thought of cheering gives me
butterflies. There is no other feeling like being in front of a crowd, the
passion radiating off the players and the excitement bouncing from the crowd. It
gets my adrenaline pumping so fast I feel like I’m going to explode! I take
huge pride being on the sidelines cheering for the Beulah Miners. We will
always be there to cheer and support the team, even if they lose the biggest
game of the season. Cheerleaders are the team’s number one fan (well after the parents).

If
you are one of those people who decide to talk bad about us or tell us to move,
just remember that cheerleaders are part of the team they are cheering for. We aren’t
going anywhere. We are at the game for the same reason you are, to cheer on the
team. Criticizing us won’t make us disappear and it certainly won’t help the
team win.
I think cheerleading is one of those
things that someone doesn’t understand until they become one. Therefore not a lot
of people understand us, and that’s okay. I just ask that you don’t criticize
us before you get to know us. Cheerleading is my life. It’s made me a more
confident and determined person. I have
made six amazing friends and some of the best memories of my life. I can’t wait
to see what next season will bring, but I do know one thing for sure. I have no
intentions of letting anyone ever dull my sparkle.
I liked how you started this out with how much you like cheering, and ended in how you think that people need to respect the sport more. You did a good job of incorporating your feelings and your opinions. Good job, and keep up the good work:)
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